Heavy Editing (100k+ words)

A big-picture edit that strengthens your story's foundation—how it flows, builds, and emotionally connects with readers. Designed for authors who want to elevate their manuscript before the final polish stage, this service combines developmental feedback with line-level editing to create a stronger, more cohesive story.

What's Included

✔ Story and structural editing

✔ Plot structure and plot inconsistency checks

✔ Pacing analysis and issue identification

✔ Character development, motivations, and relationships

✔ World-building clarity, consistency, and immersion

✔ Scene transitions and overall manuscript flow

✔ Timeline and continuity checks

✔ Stakes, conflict, and emotional impact

✔ Sentence and line editing for clarity, readability, and flow

✔ Grammar corrections

✔ Spelling corrections

✔ Punctuation fixes

✔ Formatting and capitalisation consistency

✔ Consistency checks for names, terminology, and style

✔ Tracked Changes in Microsoft Word so you can review every edit

✔ A detailed editor's report with recommendations to strengthen your manuscript